making the band

[*Sanne*]

[glow=red,2,300]'I… am…’ Dazz started drunk, but then she fell on the floor. ‘Yeah.. I’m outta here 2!’ Mig screamed stoned. Kriz looked at them. Those 2 totally started to get crazy. If they weren’t stoned, they were drunk. Fame had gone to their heads. Since they had the money for everything, they used everything. Their band BIS was really famous, but they never knew what kind of music they had to make. Dazz and Mig wanted System-of-a-down and Murderdolls-like music, while Kriz wanted Busted-or-McFly-like-music. So they changed their styles often. ‘Just go!’ Kriz screamed. ‘I can live without you. I’ll search for other girls or something…’ She mumbled. But she actually totally wasn’t sure if this would work out great.

‘Matt… can I please talk to James?’ Kriz asked crying. ‘Sure’ Matt mumbled. It was 6 am, but Kriz had to talk to James. ‘Hey!’ James said. When he heard Kriz was crying, he asked ‘What’s wrong’. ‘Could you please come over?’ Kriz asked. ‘Sure hunny… I’ll be over in a minute’. James answered. He hung up the phone. ‘He said hunny to me’ she mumbled. She felt butterflies flying up and down, from left to right, making her feel ill and happy at the same time. But… But he was her best friend. She shouldn’t ruin that relationship. He was the best friend she ever had.

‘Just do auditions or something.. but don’t stop it hunny. Stop crying, there are a lot more girls who want to join your band. And like the same music as you.’ He said, trying to calm her down. ‘Maybe…’ Kriz answered crying. ‘Hey.. you should search for someone for your band! I can help you’ James said. ‘Great idea.. but I’ll do it alone. Otherwise people will think that we are engaged, married and pregnant at the same time.’ Kriz said, laughing a little. ‘I wish we were...’ James mumbled, but Kriz didn’t hear him anymore. [/glow]

[<[D!M!TRa]>]

oh!!! u started a new fic!!! that is great hunny!!!! i lovedthe beginnig...and poor kriz...u didnt listen to jb....oh...anywayz...sanne...i loved ur fic!!! it is amazig!!! i totally loved this!!! u definitelly should post some morer as soon as possible!!!! ok? im waiting!!! so...hurrry up....ok?

[_LosEr.FreaKo_]

cooliz dudettezzy.. moi like it pst mre.. ;D ;D ;D

[>~{§KãtêR G@£}~<]

absolutely wikid hunny you gotta post more

[bieke]

wicked dude .. keep posting ;d

[*Sanne*]

[glow=red,2,300]The part was b-o-r-i-n-g

So i'll post a new one.. ;D

Kriz sat in her car, and drove to a small shop, to buy a newspaper. She putted on sunglasses, and walked in. Just like she expected, it already was on the frontpage, in every tabloid. A young guy, maybe 25 years old, walked in, and greeted her. 'Can i help you?' he asked. 'No.. i'm fine thanx' Kriz answered. She looked up, but when she did her sunglasses fell off. She looked away, but the guy already recognised her. 'Oh my god... You're Kriz!' The guy screamed. Luckily she was the only one in the shop, so she nodded shyly. 'Did you really break up?' The guy asked curious. Kriz nodded again, and then a tear rolled down her cheek. 'It's not your fault hunny...' The guy said. Kriz smiled, and asked 'What's your name by the way?'. 'Oh... i'm Frank' the guy answered. 'So, what are you gonna do now?' he asked. 'I don't know...' Kriz answered. 'Maybe i know a girl for you.. she would love to be in your band.' Frank said grinning. 'Ok... tell me: where can i find her?' Kriz asked curious. 'Uh... well... that's the problem. She walked away from home. But she's hanging around somewhere on the streets.' Frank answered. [/glow]

[bieke]

erhm rite ........
but cmon dude oh
well keep posting ;D

[Kriz]

THIS FIC IS AWESOME1!!!!!ITS SOOO GREAT!!!;D
and why didn't I hear james evil mig and dazz for leaving the band...
plz post more soon!!!

[->MaRz<-]

this is wicked hunny and you better post more asap....!!! ;D ;D ;DAND IT IS NOT BORING!! it is very good and don;t moan missy!!

[>~{§KãtêR G@£}~<]

wikid hunny post more

[<[D!M!TRa]>]

[glow=red,10,300]IT
IS
NOT
BORING
OK?
THIS
IS AMAZING!!!
SO WICKED!!!
AND FRANK
WAS
SO
NICE
WITH KRIZ
YAY!!!!
GO GIRL!!!!
POST
SOME
MORE
AS
SOON
AS
POSSIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVED THIS!!![/glow]

[*Sanne*]

[glow=red,2,300]Thankiez for the replies so much! Love ya!

'Oh well.. Maybe i don't need her that much as i think...' Kriz mumbled. A stinky, smelling, growse-looking girl didn't really make her happy. Frank laughed because of the look of disgust in Kriz's eyes. 'She isn't on the streets for that long...' Frank laughed. Kriz nodded a little. At least she could try it. 'Can you show me a picture of the girl?' Kriz asked. 'Yeah, here it is' Frank said, handing her a small photo of a girl laughing a fake smile in the camera, her blond hair hold up by little clips, while wearing dark blue jeans and a white shirt with a cheeky story on it. Next to her stood a girl, who looked so different. Black short hair, baggy clothes, she looked way cooler than the other one. Kriz recognised them both. ‘THAT’S ME!’ She screamed, while pointing at the black-haired girl. ‘Oh my god.. that’s Sanne..’ Kriz mumbled, looking at the other girl. ‘How did she end up on the street…’ Kriz said. ‘Well, I told you.. But you better search her before she gets into the same sh*t as all the other girls on the street.’ Frank answered sadly.

‘James… would you please come over?’ Kriz asked. ‘I’m already on my way!’ James screamed happily. 10 minutes later he was where Kriz was. ‘So… what’s wrong?’ James asked. Kriz looked at James, hurted. ‘Well… There was this guy in the store and my sunglasses he showed me a picture and that girl and…’ Kriz started, but James stopped her. ‘I don’t understand what you’re trying to say. Please slow down’. ‘Ok.. So I gone to a store, to buy a newspaper, cuz I was sure that it would be filled with news about our break-up. But then my sunglasses fell on the floor, and so he recognised me. And he asked ‘Did you really split up?’ And I could say nothing more than ‘Yes’. And then… well there was this long story…’ Kriz said, trying to forget the cry-part, as she hated showing her weakness. ‘But it ended up with him showing me a photo of a girl who could be in my band… But the problem is: We used to be friends. I also was on the photo he showed me. But the problem is I once promised her we would have a band together. And I didn’t keep that promise. I don’t think she wants to be in a band with me’ Kriz ended. James was thinking deeply. ‘Well, if she doesn’t , I completely understand. But at least you should try it…’ James said. So they started to search. After a day of searching and shopping, they finally found a girl that looked like Sanne. The only strange thing was that she lost so much weight, and her blond hair, which used to be reaching her shoulders, now fell over her breasts. ‘I guess that’s her…’ Kriz mumbled. ‘Ok.. go ask it. You can do it’ James said, while holding her hand. ‘Hey..’ Kriz said softly. The girl turned around and looked at the person who was talking to her. After checking her out for what seemed to be ages, she screamed ‘d**n! Kriz! It’s you! I never expected to see you back!’ ‘I never expected to see you back 2… or at least.. not here’ Kriz said. Sanne looked at the guy next to Kriz. Short blond hair wiv black strokes in it, blue eyes, chubby cheeks… ‘Oh my god… Now you’ve taken the Busted-guy with you!’ Sanne screamed, making everyone look at them. A few teenagers ran over, the others just passed them. Like it gone the whole day. ‘So… did you really break up?’ Sanne asked. ‘Yeah.. we did’ Kriz answered shyly. ‘Oh.. I’m sorry. I wish there was something I could do for you, to make you feel better or something.’ Sanne said. ‘Well… there is something. Would you like to join my band?’ Kriz asked. Sanne laughed at her. She laughed so hard, Kriz thought she was going to explode. She laughed right into Kriz face. ‘Now you need me, don’t you? Don’t you?’ Sanne asked. ‘I told you this wasn’t a good idea’ Kriz said to James. ‘You know… I would love to join your band. But not after what you done to me.’ Sanne said. ‘Oh, it wasn’t totally my fault. You were being b*tchy to me all the time!’ Kriz screamed, making Sanne go really silent. ‘I know..’ Sanne mumbled. She checked her cell-phone, to check the time. ‘Oh.. is it that late already? I have to go’ Sanne said, whjle pushing down her black baggy trousers, showing a short black skirt, and pushing the black top over her head, so a dark red corset was shown. Kriz stared at Sanne. ‘Frank… he told me… he said… I thought you were on the street for just a few days!’ Kriz screamed. ‘He did? Oh.. that’s so sweet. But no… I’m not, I’m in the whole ‘circuit’-thing already.’ Sanne mumbled, taking a little plastic bag filled with XTC out of her trousers. ‘And Frank is just as bad as the rest of the other guys.’ Sanne said, while she opened the car that just stopped in front of her, showing that Frank was in. She looked at Kriz, while handing her a piece of paper. IN the second Sanne looked straight into Kriz eyes, Kriz saw the pain in her eyes. Sanne stepped in the car, and was driven away.

When the car was out of sight, Kriz opened the little paper, on which was her phone-number. ‘Look… James..’ Kriz mumbled, while handing him the piece of paper. ‘I think we should call her. The pain in her eyes was awful’ Kriz said. James shook his head, and said ‘We’ll call her later. Not now. She’ll get in trouble if we will.’ Kriz nodded a little, grabbed his hand, and while they were holding hands, they walked back.

Hihi... what a long part
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[bieke]

cool

[<[D!M!TRa]>]

yeeeeeees!!!! this was amazing!!! good 4 u hunny bunny...this was toooooooooo wickid!!!! i looooved ti1!! post more as soon as possible!!!

[Kriz]

aawwzz...awesome fic hunny!!
and it's soo evil u live on the street and I'm a super star wiv loads of money
AND YAAYA...ME AND JAMES ARE HOLDING HANDS:P;D
haha...
plz post more soon!!