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Post by _LosEr.FreaKo_ on Jun 15, 2004 12:21:48 GMT -5
[glow=magenta,2,300]"Hey guys. look who's here," Danny said and point at the entrance. "Hey guys," Dougie said. "Where have you two been?" Lauren asked them and they just shrugged. "Just got discharged from the hospital," Dougie said. "Wot happened?" James asked him. "Nothing serious," Bieke said and sat down beside Dougie. "Right woteva," Rachel said and looked at her watch. "Great i'm late for Bio."
"So wot are you having now?" Danny asked Lauren. "Maths," she said and sighed. "Right want me to walk you to your maths class?" he asked shyly. "Yeah sure why not," she said and grabbed his hands. "So aren't you like going to be late for your next lesson," Lauren said. "Who cares. look i was thinking maybe we could erm you now go out sometime next week?" Danny asked her and look down quickly. "You're asking me out?" she asked him. "Love to," she said and kissed his cheeks. he looked at her and she just grinned. "well we've reach," she said. "Yeah see you then," he said and kissed her on the lips.
"Charlie are you coming?" Rachel shouted at him. "Yesh just let me finish this drink all right," he said and gulped the drink down. "it's about time," she said and dragged him to bio class. "You're both late as usual," said Miss Hartbett. "take your seats please." [/glow]
ok a bit crappy n lauren dudettez hpe u enjoyed ya moment w/ danny i noe its not much lolz..
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Post by Harry's-Gal on Jun 15, 2004 13:15:10 GMT -5
omg rach u must do more!!!
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Post by bieke on Jun 15, 2004 13:21:35 GMT -5
Wicked , post more soon dude .. ;d
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Post by <[D!M!TRa]> on Jun 15, 2004 15:00:42 GMT -5
i loooved it!!! good for u hunny bunny!!!! this rocked!!! its brilliant!!!! awesome!!!!!!! post more asap!!!! loooved it...well i said that again...but....i just wanted to emphasize!!!!!!!!!.............hurry up!!!
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Post by >~{§KãtêR G@£}~< on Jun 15, 2004 20:24:03 GMT -5
yes hunny hunny bunny..you must post more(hops around like a rabbit....dont ask)
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Post by ->MaRz<- on Jun 16, 2004 5:10:41 GMT -5
hey....i loved the last bit!and it wasn;t crappy dudettez....loz and danny were so cute...and danny being so shy awwwwww.....hahaz....ok...irrelevant question...
LAUREN DUDETTEZ WHERE ARE YOU??
ok, i made my point.......MORE RACH!!
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Post by Harry's-Gal on Jun 16, 2004 11:07:47 GMT -5
MARA YOU'RE NEVER ONLINE WHEN I AM LOL COME ON L8ER!!! LOL THIS IS SOOO SILLY LOL ;D
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Post by Kriz on Jun 16, 2004 16:22:35 GMT -5
dude... this fic is still awesome!! totally not crappy!!! plz post some more soon!!!
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Post by >~{§KãtêR G@£}~< on Jun 23, 2004 13:53:20 GMT -5
IM DEMANDING MORE FICAGE
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Post by _LosEr.FreaKo_ on Jun 24, 2004 0:50:07 GMT -5
[glow=magenta,2,300]"Sorry Miss," they said and walked towards their seat. "What are we going to do today?" Rachel whispered to David. "Giving back our test," he said and winked at her. Charlie nudged her and gave her an evil stare. "What?" Rachel said a LIL too loud. "Miss Wiliams. i appreciate it if you don't talk to either Mr Simpson or Mr Gordon. thank you," Miss Harbett said while giving out the test paper. "Right. now that you all got your paper, hope you guys are satisfied with your marks." "OMG! i got 55 over 60," Adi said. Rachel turned around and congratulate her. "d**n i only got 56 this time round," said bith CHarlie and Rachel at the same time. they gave eachg other a weird look and looked back at their papers. "Hey Adi. wheres Harry?" Charlie asked. "Somewhere int he schhool i guess. who cares," she said and shrugged. "Right," he said and looked atrachel. she seems to have a very deep and enjoyable conversation with David. He just sighed loudly hoping to get Rachel's attention but failed miserably. "Why don't you just tell her how you feel?" Adi said and tapped his shoulder. "It'll be easier." "Talk is cheap," he said and shrugged. "Come on Chaz. you won't know the outcome till you try," Adi said hoping that it would change his mindset. "Forget it. she is better off with him," he said and a very sad and depressing tone and Adi just shrugged.
"Earth to Mara and Tom," Kriz said and the two lovebirds stop kissing. "Finally." "What do you want?" Mara asked Kriz. "Nothing just thought that this might interest you," she said and shove some magazine under Tom's nose. "What's that?" Mara asked him and sat on his lap. "Oh a form to some audition," he said. "Cool. So you're going for the audition?" Mara asked him. "i don't know. i'll discuss this with the guys. right now, i have to please someone," he said and grinned. "Er Who?" Mara asked and Tom kissed her. "Tut tut," Kri ztutted at the lovebrids and walked away.[/glow]
another crappy prt.. hehez.. review pweaze thnkiez..
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Post by bieke on Jun 24, 2004 7:08:16 GMT -5
c'mon dudette it's wicked ;D
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Post by >~{§KãtêR G@£}~< on Jun 24, 2004 7:12:02 GMT -5
oo wikid..which reminds me rach.....dunt you have a date today..or was it yesterday??
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Post by ->MaRz<- on Jun 24, 2004 12:53:06 GMT -5
somebody's not answering the question...lolz......dudettez the last bit wsn;t crappy...it was brilliant....me and tom./...*droooooooooools* lolz.....it was wicked hunny and i demand some more NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!please??
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Post by Kriz on Jun 24, 2004 14:47:52 GMT -5
dude... that wasn't crappy!!! it was really cool!!! plz post more soon!!!;D
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Post by <[D!M!TRa]> on Jun 28, 2004 11:48:17 GMT -5
amazing!!! not crappt!!!!! amazing!!! awesome!!!! i demand some more 2!!! hurry up...dont leave us this way1!!!! pleeeeeeasE??????????????
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