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Post by ->MaRz<- on Jun 12, 2004 10:31:08 GMT -5
hello dudettez!!! thats our new joint fic!!! we want to make clear that the parts, are being written by both of us the same time and that the title was a stupid thing jim wanted us to write...inspired by american pie title...hope u will see the connection...hahaz!!! so...thats the first bit, hope you all like it!!! [glow=red,2,300] ‘’The next one of you that is going to kick me won’t make it through the night. I warn you, don’t tell me that I didn’t!’’ Rachel snarled ‘’Someone is angry here and that’s not me, Rachel, do you have your period, AGAIN?’’ Lauren replied quickly ‘’Dudes can you just shut up now? We are trying to watch a movie here in case you haven’t noticed!’’ Kriz said while trying to fit five ‘’Oreos’’ in her mouth ‘’And please remind me again, why did we decide to watch that disgusting romantic cheesy movie in the first place?’’ Mara asked rhetorically ‘’But…but…but…why? This is a reeeeeally great movie you know!’’ Rachel said defensively ‘’I think you and Charlie would really make a great couple, you may be the only people on this planet that like this movie so much, along with the people that play in it!’’ Dimitra laughed ‘’What? What are you talking about? Charlie and I have nothing in common, I want to make this clear, ok?’’ Rachel said, trying to look angry ‘’Erm…ok dude we were only joking, we had good intentions, I promise!!!’’ Kriz told her after her apology ‘’Don’t you think that Rachel overreacted a little? Rachel, what is going on here??’’ Adi asked curiously ‘’Yeah, I noticed that too, is there something you are not telling us Rachel? Oh my god, what is going on here?’’ Bieke asked getting excited now that there was someone to make fun of ‘’Rachel fancies Charlie, Rachel fancies Charlie! NANA NANA BANANA!!!’’ Mara and Dimitra sang together the same time ‘’I don’t fancy Charlie, are you serious? Me and Charlie? Charlie isn’t my type at all you know!’’ Rachel tried to convince them ‘’Yeah right dude, we all believe you now!’’ Kriz said sarcastically At that point Tom, Mara’s brother shyly entered the room ‘’Hey girls, I was going to sleep and I was wondering if you wanted me to get you anything before I go. So?’’ Tom asked the girls with a look full of care ‘’No Tommy! Thank you very much for asking, go to bed now, we don’t want anything! Thanks for asking!’’ all the girls except Mara said ‘’Sis, do YOU want anything?’’ Tom continued ‘’No Tom, thanks Tom, you can go now Tom, good night Tom, we wont need you Tom, bye Tom’’ Mara said as she pushed him out of the room …<br>[/glow] enjoy....
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Post by ->MaRz<- on Jun 12, 2004 10:33:37 GMT -5
dudettez please tell us what u think and if you want us to post any more!!! muax!!!
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Post by bieke on Jun 12, 2004 10:33:37 GMT -5
wicked *smiles* !! ;d
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Post by ->MaRz<- on Jun 12, 2004 10:36:25 GMT -5
u know hunny bunny....u r in this fic...hope u like being with tom...spanish!!! kisses!!!
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Post by _LosEr.FreaKo_ on Jun 12, 2004 10:42:48 GMT -5
im want either u or dimitra to post more ASAP if not im not gonna tlk to u .. lolz..ok tt so childish but i learnt it frm marz.. muahaha.. cme on dudettez post mre
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Post by >~{§KãtêR G@£}~< on Jun 13, 2004 7:59:57 GMT -5
omg this is such a wickid fic....toms so sweet..aww... english ppudding..girls you really gotta get out more oh and i almost forgot rachel fancies charlie rachel fancies charlie nana nana banana
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Post by bieke on Jun 13, 2004 11:25:01 GMT -5
wicked ;d nanana banana hehe that is nana banana ;D ^-^'
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Post by <[D!M!TRa]> on Jun 13, 2004 17:23:13 GMT -5
hello girls!!! just wanted to send the next part!!! hope u all like it!!! marz and i tried to mention all of u and all the girls that havent read their names yet...they ll soon be mentioned!!!! enjoooy!!! (as marz says) [glow=red,2,300] …<br>‘’Did you see how gorgeous he was in this outfit? Oh my god! He is just soooo great! So irresistible!’’Bieke asked the girls while she was taking a break from drooling ‘’Erm, he wasn’t so gorgeous considering the fact he was wearing his ‘’Toy Story’’ pijamas…so chill out…’’<br>‘’EUW!!!! How could you say that?? He is my brother for god’s sake, that’s disgusting! How could you?’’ Mara said with a disgusted look on her face ‘’You know Marzzy, he is your brother, not mine, I could never fancy my bro, Dougie isn’t so gorgeous anyway…’’ Bieke said matter-of-factly ‘’Dougie? DOUGIE? DOOOOOOUGIE??? Who said that name? are you doing this on purpose? Evil friends!’’ Adi said scaring the others sounding too obsessed ‘’Adi fancies Dougie! Adi fancies Dougie!!! NANA NANA BANANA!!!’’ Mara and Dimitra sang again in unison! ‘’I want details now dudettez!!! You cant leave me just like that…you are going to tell me EVERYTHING!!! Or….or…im going to tell you about me and Danny….AGAIN!!!’’ Lauren said threateningly ‘’No…not again…’’ Rachel said in despair ‘’Lauren I will do anything…but please don’t start again…’’ Kriz said quickly…<br>‘’You know what I want you to do!’’ Lauren continued ‘’ I can tell you about me and Harry, but please stop…really…dudes…do you want me to tell you about what happened between Harry and me yesterday?’’ Kriz said dreamily ‘’Erm….NO!!!!’’ Rachel , Mara and Dimitra said again in unison ‘’ That’s not fair…that’s…that’s…that’s unfair!’’ Kriz said ‘’Erm…we know…you made your point pretty clear my beloved Kriz’’ Adi laughed At that point Tom opened the door one more time and put his head inside ‘’Erm…you know girls…erm…I forgot to ask…erm…Bieke…do you want anything? I mean…don’t hesitate to ask…I can bring it to you…huh?’’ he shyly asked Bieke blushing ‘’You know…erm…I don’t want anything, but thanks for asking anyway…that’s really sweet of you…but I don’t want anything…<br>‘’Yeah, except you…’’ Rachel interrupted the little talking Tom and Bieke had ‘’Huh? Erm…I guess im going then…but…Bieke…if you need anything at all, come and tell me…’’ Tom repeated staring dreamily at her. As he made his way out of the room again he kept staring at her and as a result it was to knock his nose on the door ‘’This must have hurt…poor Tom…at last love hurts…’’ Rachel said sarcastically and every girl in the room burst out laughing ‘’That was so bad of you…I am going to see if he is ok…’’ Bieke said furiously and walked out of the room ....[/glow]
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Post by >~{§KãtêR G@£}~< on Jun 14, 2004 3:28:55 GMT -5
omg i luff this fic..i dun stop laughing when im reaidng it haha..you gotta post more babes
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Post by bieke on Jun 14, 2004 11:51:34 GMT -5
wicked ;d
in lier in lier ?? omg omg ...sorry sorry being random as i said wicked Ooh wait i forgot nana banana ;d ... poor tom though ;d ^-^'
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Post by >~{§KãtêR G@£}~< on Jun 15, 2004 21:36:11 GMT -5
hunnys its been ages since you posted..im gonna start a petition and you dun want me doing that
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Post by ->MaRz<- on Jun 16, 2004 4:25:55 GMT -5
oh yes we do...i wanna see how far you can go dudettez....hahaz..... ;D muahahahahaz.....
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Post by _LosEr.FreaKo_ on Jun 16, 2004 4:31:28 GMT -5
yeah me wan more too.. cme on marz..
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Post by ->MaRz<- on Jun 16, 2004 5:06:15 GMT -5
awwww.....girls...jim has what we've written saved in her comp....i can;t post more...she has to....
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Post by <[D!M!TRa]> on Jun 16, 2004 5:24:07 GMT -5
hello dudettez!!!!!! look....until some piint both marz and me have writtne the fic...but i have saved it in my comp...so...i will send those first bits...and after that we gonna continue the fic one after the other!!!! hope u enjoy this!!! kisses!!!
[glow=red,2,300]She made her way to the kitchen where Tom was. He was holding his bleeding nose and looking furiously in the cupboards for the first aid kit. ‘’Are you ok?’’ she asked him worriedly ‘’Yes, im…fine…doesn’t it show ?’’ he answered trying to hide the pain ‘’Do you…want me to help you?’’ she continued ‘’Is that possible?’’ ‘’Of course, just sit down and I will find the things we need, ok?’’ she said as he sat down After a while she was putting some ice on his blue nose trying to stop the bleeding ‘’Do you feel better now?’’ she asked him in a caring tone ‘’Yes, Im better…thanks to you!’’ he replied with a love tone He kept looking around perplexedly…he wanted to ask her something, but he couldn’t find the courage to do it ‘’Erm…really…not that im interested…but…what did Rachel mean when she said that before?’’ he finally asked her ‘’What are you talking about? I haven’t heard anything. Did you?’’ she said ‘’No, nothing…never mind…didn’t mean nothing in the first place…forget I have ever mentioned that…I think its better for us to return to our business…you better go back to the girls, they will be waiting for you…’’ Tom told her ‘’Yes, guess you are right. I am off…hope you will soon feel better…’’ she said and made her way to the stairs. She started leaving…but the last moment she turned around ‘’You know….i just remembered something Rachel said , but im not quite sure if we are talking about the same thing…’’ she started Tom looked at her expectantly…He stood up and he started moving closer to her…When their faces were inches away from each other…<br>“So, what did you hear Rachel say?” he asked grinning cheekily “Erm…you know…ahem…hmm…she…said…erm…about…she…continued…with…and…after that…she…erm…ok? Did you get the whole point?’’ she reluctantly told him…<br> At that point he leant and kissed softly on her lips, they stayed like that for tens of moments and it seemed like ages to them ‘’You know…I don’t really matter what she said…do you?’’ Tom asked ‘’Yeah! I don’t matter either, so we can just stay here and…say what WE wanted to say to each other all those months…what do you think?’’ Bieke told him as Tom was looking deeply into her eyes He didn’t replied, he just kissed her again…this time more passionately ‘’God, I wanted to do that for ages!! ‘’ Tom said and they both laughed [/glow]
please tell me what u think?....kisses!!!
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